Tuesday 25 March 2014
Ruby's Building Poem (Mole Class)
Big yellow diggers all around,
Churning up the muddy ground.
Cranes lifting bricks up so high,
I bet they could reach the sky.
My school looks like a different place,
Lots of children, we need the space.
Crashing and bashing when I'm in my class,
So many noises, when will they pass.
The men sit down for a cup of tea,
And that means, at last, some peace for me.
Big yellow diggers all around,
Churning up the muddy ground.
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Well done, Ruby - yours is the first entry again! Fantastic poem too!
ReplyDeleteI wonder who will be next. Well done Ruby, you are the 100 Word Challenge Queen!
ReplyDeleteWhat a brilliant poem Ruby - well done. I liked the way you used the first two lines again to end the poem.
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